Rebirth
Maybe we were trees
in our former life:
side by side,
roots deeply tangled,
branches barely touching,
and when the moon
performed its sonata
our leaves sang
the same melody.
Lovers,
dreamers,
and runaways
found a safe haven
from our shelter
Seasons changed,
people changed,
yet we were always
growing together
in love and beauty
side by side.
Perhaps then
we decided that
we would be poets
in this life,
growing together
in love and beauty.
Although
seasons have changed,
people have changed,
and even we are no longer the same
our roots still lie
firmly
in fertile soil.
© Noora
So beautiful.
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Thank you, Frank!!
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Beautiful, I adored the way you opened the invitive door into the poem and the way that you finished it, full of succulent thoughts in the middle. Great work!
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I appreciate your feedback hugely, Oloriel. You know how much I love your work. Thank you. xx
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I just edited the poem slightly. Actually, I only added a missing a word: “be” (poets). It is in the original version – no idea what happened. Thank you for letting me know, teacher! :))) ❤
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I guess I didn’t leave a comment, but I meant to! I love the part about the trees deeply tangled in roots but leaves barely touching. Majestic.
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“To be, or not to be” 🙂 Hope you’ve had a very Shakespearean day, Karen! ❤ P.S. And thank you – as always.
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Love…
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Thank you for reading, Julie! Love & smiles.
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My my. Your capacity to express beautifully is unmatched by none! Simple, profound and classy! 🙂
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I’m truly humbled by your feedback, Soumyajit. That means a lot coming from you. I have never considered myself “gifted”… though fortunate in many ways. We all have a unique voice and a story to tell – I’m blessed to have been given the words. They’re my “tools”.
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So beautiful and loving…
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Thank you very much for reading, PP! I hope your week is filled with beauty and passion.
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I admire the way you build your poems. You have a wonderful talent for a storytelling. What is this poem about?
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Thank you, Sarah. To me, it has two different meanings… but I let the reader make their own interpretation of this poem. Much love! xx
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Wonderfully, as always!
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Thanks, Sky! So thrilled that you liked it. Love & light.
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..you are such a sensitive soul Noora, a beautifully textured poem…peace..
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Thank you!! I’m so glad you liked the texture. I’m also surprisingly satisfied with the outcome. I am… very sensitive. Luckily, I’ve managed to turn it into my greatest strength. Love and light. – N
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“Maybe you are searching among the branches, for what only appears in the roots” ~ Rumi
Brilliant work.
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I LOVE Rumi. Thank you so much for reading, writing and sharing this beautiful quote.
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Wow!!! So glad I popped by. This is truly wonderful Noora. I absolutely love it.
Lovers
Dreamers
Runaways
Found a safe haven
From our shelter
Magnificent, really stunning.
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… I’m glad you did! Thank you so much – that is a huge compliment coming from you, Michael.
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Thank you, that’s very kind.
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Reblogged this on man of words and commented:
Such a wonderful #poem I must share it. Do give yourself a moment to enjoy – Simply stunning!: Rebirth http://wp.me/s3sH5c-rebirth via @PoeticEchoes
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Thank you so much for reblogging my poem, Michael. I appreciate it a lot. I’m eagerly looking forward to your book.
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My pleasure its wonderful – Thank you. Thx for your encouragement with the book too, I really appreciate it
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I really enjoyed this, Noora. 🙂
I have felt like this…exactly. Seems like only weeks ago.
There’s Was a time I felt connected in this way. The timing was off, however, and we lost contact with each other. Mostly due to stubbornness and our pride.
There is still love. Our roots are still entwined. Surely the first couple lines “did it” for me.
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Hey there! Thank you SO much for reading and sharing your personal story. One of the greatest things about poetry is that we can find our own interpretation – as if it was written for us. It is always very inspiring to know that my words have touched someone. 🙂 Much love. – N
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Hope you will make your way over to my site. 🙂
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I’m already following you 🙂 I’ve had such a hectic week, but I’ll definitely check out your blog ASAP.
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Awesome!
I will be catching up on blogs as well. Probably during the Grammy commercials. 🙂
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How completely beautiful!!i love this!! 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much, Helen! xx
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Profound. It is always such a pleasure visiting your space.
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Mamta!! How are YOU? I’ve missed you.
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I am good. I have missed you too, my friend! Feels amazing to read ur beautiful words again!!
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A very beautiful piece, Noora. —Chagall
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Thank you so much, Chagall!
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Just read this piece again, a year plus later. Love it just as much as I did the first time. 🙂 —Carlos
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Thank you so much, Carlos! This piece has sentimental value to me.
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Seriously! Can 6 years have gone by since this last exchange? …so much entanglement, so much soil… 🙂 —CC
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Your creativity is a powerful force! I’m a fan!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I’m a huge fan of your poetry.
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Beautiful imagery in this with trees-I hold them dearly in my own work. So lovely! Thanks for the follow on my blog today. I am so honored by it! I’ll be following you too Noora. Blessings to you.
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My pleasure. I’ve been really busy lately, but I can’t wait read more of your work. Have a wonderful week. – Noora
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Noora, this poem is exquisite. Thank you for ‘liking’ my Rebirth poem. Imagine my pleasant surprise when I came over to your site and saw your Rebirth! Life is good 🙂
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… it surely is! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my work. I appreciate it very much. I’m always looking forward to your posts, Michele!
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Perfectly written…!!! 🙂
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Echoes and Reflections and commented:
Hope you all have an inspiring week, filled with love, laughter and good madness!
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beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you – it means a lot coming from a wonderful poet like you!
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Reblogged this on Finding myself and commented:
A very beautiful piece.I can relate……Nora this piece deserve to be shared a thousand time.
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It always feels so wonderful when a reader tells me they’ve related to something I’ve written. Thank you deeply for sharing my poem – it made my heart smile.
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Absolutely beautiful, dear Noora… I love the last stanza. ❤
Love. Aquileana 😀
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Thank you so much, Aquileana. So glad that you enjoyed!!! 🙂
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poem by a talented writer. Please read and enjoy her words and artwork.
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Thank you so much for your support and kind words, John. It means a lot to me. I’m glad you liked “Rebirth” and wanted to share it with your followers. The poem has great sentimental value to me. Thank you!
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It did and you are welcome.
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Noor is explicit in your words…compassion flows like anything…Great work
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Thank you very much for reading. I’m humbled by your kind words.
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This is just gorgeous!
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Thank you so much for reading, Lisa! Glad you liked it.
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it a lot!!
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my pleasure!
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Thank you so much!
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My please!!
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A very beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Clarabelle and commented:
Beautiful poetry by Noora…I love this poem “Rebirth”….
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Thank you so much for re-blogging my poem! I appreciate it hugely!
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Most welcome Noora.
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Such a lovely poem Noora, very beautiful indeed…you are very talented. Clarabelle
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Thank you so much for the comment. I’m sorry it has taken a while to reply, but I took a break from blogging. It’s great to be back.
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Thank you Noora, welcome back.
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